Post by jason2313 on Oct 16, 2007 16:58:38 GMT -5
Here is Chapter 2 of 'The Ultimate Battle' hope you enjoy it. Please send me your comments.
Chapter two
“A Change in Heart”, and “A Visitor”
About seven years later in July of 1990, it was the day of the twins 9th birthday only a few hours away. At around 6:00 in the morning when Harry was getting up and was going to leave their kitchen pantry turned bedroom. Harry was 9 years old, had dark brown hair and glasses, looked very thin, short, and had green eyes.
He turned to open the door and noticed that it was locked and when he looked through the door, he saw a blonde head of hair against the door. So he grabbed a handful of hair and pulled, there was a yell, and two things fell to the floor, and he knew that his two annoying little cousins were holding the door closed so he couldn’t get out.
Cole and Dylan are twins that look exactly alike both had blonde hair and the only thing that can tell them apart is that there is a mole on right under his left ear.
“Owwww” said both Cole and Dylan
“What did you do that for?” said Dylan
“How was I supposed to get out if you two are holding the door closed?” said Harry innocently “I’m 9 your 8 do the math”
“NO, were going to be nine at eleven nineteen this morning,” said Cole
“No, I’m going to nine at eleven nineteen and you’re going to be nine at eleven twenty-nine” Dylan said angrily
“Still” Dylan starting to get annoyed
“Still what?” said Harry confused
“Still, it doesn’t matter that you’re older than us” Dylan said viciously
“Well, I DON’T CARE THAT YOU’RE YOUNGER AND I’M OLDER,” Harry yelled “I… Don’t… Care…, except for the fact that you keep bossing the three of us around” Harry said while walking towards Dylan and yelling at each other for twenty minutes.
“STOOOOP!” yelled a small voice
They stopped yelling.
“Dylan stop yelling at Harry?” said a small child and he quickly
ran to Harry
“Nick, what are you doing up so early?” Harry asked the small boy
“You all woke me up,” said Nick
“Well go back to bed than” said Harry as he was putting him down.
“Will you stop yelling if I go back to bed?” said Nick
“Fine” said both Harry and Dylan
“Now go back in the pantry” said Harry
The boy turned around, went to the door, and went in the kitchen pantry.
“Don’t you hate living in the pantry” said Cole curiously
“Well it’s annoying but…” Harry strayed off because Mr. Bishop was coming into the kitchen.
“What are you all talkin’ about?” said Mr. Bishop “GET BACK IN THE PANTRY!” he yelled. In addition, he hit Harry in the back of the head.
“HEY!” yelled Cole absent-mindedly
“What did you say to me?” said Mr. Bishop
“Er… He didn’t say anything Uncle Vernon,” said Harry
“Yes, he did,” said Uncle Vernon
“NO, HE DIDN’T!” yelled Harry
“DON’T YELL AT ME BOY!” Uncle Vernon yelled even louder than Harry did
“Then you stop yelling” said Harry “You started it Uncle Vernon”
“Fine,” he said “but one more outburst like this and you’ll wish you’d never been born boy” said Uncle Vernon “NO WONDER WHY YOUR BLOODY PARENTS GOT BLOWN UP!” he yelled
Four things happened at once, Harry made a movement forward, but Cole held him back to try to restrain him. Then there was a bang and first Cole was hit in the head. Then Harry was hit in the back of the head.
Then the next thing Harry knew was that laying on a bed in a Hospital room with a bandage on his head and his little brother Nick lying next to him fast asleep and his cousin Cole was laying unconscious in the next bed over.
Harry was in the bed next to the window and could see everything even the little people walking around… on the boats… 9 floors below… looking like ants and he could see the river. On the nightstand next to him was an envelope that was very, very thick and heavy, made of yellowish parchment, and the address was written in emerald-green ink with no stamps on it.
As he was reaching for the letter, Mr. Bishop came out of nowhere, grabbed it, ripped it up, and threw it out of the window and it floated down and down into the river where it sunk slowly down until it was out of sight. And it turned out that 20 minutes later 10 owls flew fast the windows and ten look alike envelopes the same as before flew in threw the window and just as before Harry and Mr. Bishop repeated the same process again and again and again until ten o’clock that evening.
“What is this rubbish?” shouted Mr. Bishop each time the letters came through the window until they suddenly stopped coming.
Harry’s brother woke up.
‘’Your up” said Nick
“How long has it been?” said Harry
“Five and half days” said Nick
“So that means,” said Harry
“Yeah, two hours until you turn ten,” said Nick
“Yeah, but it’s just another year with Dylan and Uncle Vernon” said Harry
“Cole tried to save your life a few days ago back in the kitchen,” said Nick
It suddenly started raining and hour later.
“Just twenty minutes til twelve o’clock” said Nick
“10 minutes” said Harry
“5 minutes” said Nick
“1 minute” said Harry
“1 second” said Nick
The clock struck twelve o’ clock and suddenly hospital door swung open, someone walked in, and Harry noticed that he was ten feet tall and had long mangled hair.
“Who are you?” said Harry
“Rubeus Hagrid, Keeper of Keys, and Grounds at Hogwarts” said Hagrid “this is yours”
Hagrid handed him a yellowish parchment.
Mr. H. Potter
Rm. 2012
St. James’s Hospital
Westminster
England
He opened it and read.
HOGWARTS SCHOOL
of WITCHCRAFT and WIZARDRY
___________________
Headmaster: Albus Dumbledore
(Order of Merlin, First Class, Grand Sorcery, Chief Warlock,
Supreme Mugwump, International Confederation of Wizards, and voted one of greatest wizard's of our time.)
Dear Mr. Potter,
We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.
Term begins on September 1st. We await your owl by no later than July 31st.
Yours sincerely,
Minerva McGonagall,
Deputy Headmistress
“I don’t get it,” said Harry
“You’re a Wizard,” said Hagrid
“I’m a what?” said Harry
“A Wizard and an excellent one I’d expect” said Hagrid
“So I’ll just send this letter to Professor Dumbledore and the two of us will be on our way,” said Hagrid
“Yeah, But what about my brother” said Harry “I can’t just leave him here with them alone for a whole year”
“Er, I dunno I’ll ask him in the letter he can come with us tonight and when we go to get the supplies,” said Hagrid
Dear Professor Dumbledore,
Given Harry his letter.
And he is wondering if he can bring his little brother to school.
Taking him to buy his things tomorrow.
Weathers horrible. Hope you’re well.
Hagrid
He folded it put it in an envelope reached into his coat and pulled out an owl, attached the envelope to the owl and threw the bird out of the window and it flew off.
“Come on we have to get there before morning” said Hagrid “and by the way Harry… Happy Birthday. I baked ya a cake. It’s vanilla”
“Come on Nick, get your stuff, and let’s go,” said Harry
“Alright” said Nick
Mr. Bishop finally woke up, noticed Hagrid at the doorway along with Harry and Nick about to leave, then noticed a large piece of parchment on his head, and finally spoke without reading it.
“Where do the two of you think you r going at this hour?” said Uncle Vernon angrily
“Read the parchment on your head Bishop,” said Hagrid
He read aloud.
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Bishop,
Your nephew Harry has been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He will not be home from 1st September-30th June.
Sincerely,
Albus Dumbledore
There was second piece of parchment. He read.
Dear Parent(s) or Guardian(s),
I hereby state that my ___________, ____________ has permission to go the Village of Hogsmeade.
Student Signature x___________
Student please print x___________
Parent(s) or Guardian(s) Signature x___________
Parent(s) or Guardian(s) please print x___________
Sincerely,
Professor Webster
“I am not signing this,” he shouted
10 minutes later, they were in a Hospital corridor watching Hagrid trying to push the button to make the list come up or down from wherever it is.
“Maybe its broken ‘cause of confusion” whispered Nick
“Don’t say that it’s mean”
“At the Ministry the lifts there have buttons that are outward not in. And it can go anywhere in the building and some say that there’s a room there that isn’t even there. They call it the White Room,” said Hagrid
Suddenly there was a BIG boom and all the lights and power cut off.
(Chapter 3 won't be coming out for a long time so please be patient. I anticipate a month or 2 maybe by the end of December as a holiday treat. Chapter 3 will be very fun.)
Chapter two
“A Change in Heart”, and “A Visitor”
About seven years later in July of 1990, it was the day of the twins 9th birthday only a few hours away. At around 6:00 in the morning when Harry was getting up and was going to leave their kitchen pantry turned bedroom. Harry was 9 years old, had dark brown hair and glasses, looked very thin, short, and had green eyes.
He turned to open the door and noticed that it was locked and when he looked through the door, he saw a blonde head of hair against the door. So he grabbed a handful of hair and pulled, there was a yell, and two things fell to the floor, and he knew that his two annoying little cousins were holding the door closed so he couldn’t get out.
Cole and Dylan are twins that look exactly alike both had blonde hair and the only thing that can tell them apart is that there is a mole on right under his left ear.
“Owwww” said both Cole and Dylan
“What did you do that for?” said Dylan
“How was I supposed to get out if you two are holding the door closed?” said Harry innocently “I’m 9 your 8 do the math”
“NO, were going to be nine at eleven nineteen this morning,” said Cole
“No, I’m going to nine at eleven nineteen and you’re going to be nine at eleven twenty-nine” Dylan said angrily
“Still” Dylan starting to get annoyed
“Still what?” said Harry confused
“Still, it doesn’t matter that you’re older than us” Dylan said viciously
“Well, I DON’T CARE THAT YOU’RE YOUNGER AND I’M OLDER,” Harry yelled “I… Don’t… Care…, except for the fact that you keep bossing the three of us around” Harry said while walking towards Dylan and yelling at each other for twenty minutes.
“STOOOOP!” yelled a small voice
They stopped yelling.
“Dylan stop yelling at Harry?” said a small child and he quickly
ran to Harry
“Nick, what are you doing up so early?” Harry asked the small boy
“You all woke me up,” said Nick
“Well go back to bed than” said Harry as he was putting him down.
“Will you stop yelling if I go back to bed?” said Nick
“Fine” said both Harry and Dylan
“Now go back in the pantry” said Harry
The boy turned around, went to the door, and went in the kitchen pantry.
“Don’t you hate living in the pantry” said Cole curiously
“Well it’s annoying but…” Harry strayed off because Mr. Bishop was coming into the kitchen.
“What are you all talkin’ about?” said Mr. Bishop “GET BACK IN THE PANTRY!” he yelled. In addition, he hit Harry in the back of the head.
“HEY!” yelled Cole absent-mindedly
“What did you say to me?” said Mr. Bishop
“Er… He didn’t say anything Uncle Vernon,” said Harry
“Yes, he did,” said Uncle Vernon
“NO, HE DIDN’T!” yelled Harry
“DON’T YELL AT ME BOY!” Uncle Vernon yelled even louder than Harry did
“Then you stop yelling” said Harry “You started it Uncle Vernon”
“Fine,” he said “but one more outburst like this and you’ll wish you’d never been born boy” said Uncle Vernon “NO WONDER WHY YOUR BLOODY PARENTS GOT BLOWN UP!” he yelled
Four things happened at once, Harry made a movement forward, but Cole held him back to try to restrain him. Then there was a bang and first Cole was hit in the head. Then Harry was hit in the back of the head.
Then the next thing Harry knew was that laying on a bed in a Hospital room with a bandage on his head and his little brother Nick lying next to him fast asleep and his cousin Cole was laying unconscious in the next bed over.
Harry was in the bed next to the window and could see everything even the little people walking around… on the boats… 9 floors below… looking like ants and he could see the river. On the nightstand next to him was an envelope that was very, very thick and heavy, made of yellowish parchment, and the address was written in emerald-green ink with no stamps on it.
As he was reaching for the letter, Mr. Bishop came out of nowhere, grabbed it, ripped it up, and threw it out of the window and it floated down and down into the river where it sunk slowly down until it was out of sight. And it turned out that 20 minutes later 10 owls flew fast the windows and ten look alike envelopes the same as before flew in threw the window and just as before Harry and Mr. Bishop repeated the same process again and again and again until ten o’clock that evening.
“What is this rubbish?” shouted Mr. Bishop each time the letters came through the window until they suddenly stopped coming.
Harry’s brother woke up.
‘’Your up” said Nick
“How long has it been?” said Harry
“Five and half days” said Nick
“So that means,” said Harry
“Yeah, two hours until you turn ten,” said Nick
“Yeah, but it’s just another year with Dylan and Uncle Vernon” said Harry
“Cole tried to save your life a few days ago back in the kitchen,” said Nick
It suddenly started raining and hour later.
“Just twenty minutes til twelve o’clock” said Nick
“10 minutes” said Harry
“5 minutes” said Nick
“1 minute” said Harry
“1 second” said Nick
The clock struck twelve o’ clock and suddenly hospital door swung open, someone walked in, and Harry noticed that he was ten feet tall and had long mangled hair.
“Who are you?” said Harry
“Rubeus Hagrid, Keeper of Keys, and Grounds at Hogwarts” said Hagrid “this is yours”
Hagrid handed him a yellowish parchment.
Mr. H. Potter
Rm. 2012
St. James’s Hospital
Westminster
England
He opened it and read.
HOGWARTS SCHOOL
of WITCHCRAFT and WIZARDRY
___________________
Headmaster: Albus Dumbledore
(Order of Merlin, First Class, Grand Sorcery, Chief Warlock,
Supreme Mugwump, International Confederation of Wizards, and voted one of greatest wizard's of our time.)
Dear Mr. Potter,
We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.
Term begins on September 1st. We await your owl by no later than July 31st.
Yours sincerely,
Minerva McGonagall,
Deputy Headmistress
“I don’t get it,” said Harry
“You’re a Wizard,” said Hagrid
“I’m a what?” said Harry
“A Wizard and an excellent one I’d expect” said Hagrid
“So I’ll just send this letter to Professor Dumbledore and the two of us will be on our way,” said Hagrid
“Yeah, But what about my brother” said Harry “I can’t just leave him here with them alone for a whole year”
“Er, I dunno I’ll ask him in the letter he can come with us tonight and when we go to get the supplies,” said Hagrid
Dear Professor Dumbledore,
Given Harry his letter.
And he is wondering if he can bring his little brother to school.
Taking him to buy his things tomorrow.
Weathers horrible. Hope you’re well.
Hagrid
He folded it put it in an envelope reached into his coat and pulled out an owl, attached the envelope to the owl and threw the bird out of the window and it flew off.
“Come on we have to get there before morning” said Hagrid “and by the way Harry… Happy Birthday. I baked ya a cake. It’s vanilla”
“Come on Nick, get your stuff, and let’s go,” said Harry
“Alright” said Nick
Mr. Bishop finally woke up, noticed Hagrid at the doorway along with Harry and Nick about to leave, then noticed a large piece of parchment on his head, and finally spoke without reading it.
“Where do the two of you think you r going at this hour?” said Uncle Vernon angrily
“Read the parchment on your head Bishop,” said Hagrid
He read aloud.
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Bishop,
Your nephew Harry has been accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He will not be home from 1st September-30th June.
Sincerely,
Albus Dumbledore
There was second piece of parchment. He read.
Dear Parent(s) or Guardian(s),
I hereby state that my ___________, ____________ has permission to go the Village of Hogsmeade.
Student Signature x___________
Student please print x___________
Parent(s) or Guardian(s) Signature x___________
Parent(s) or Guardian(s) please print x___________
Sincerely,
Professor Webster
“I am not signing this,” he shouted
10 minutes later, they were in a Hospital corridor watching Hagrid trying to push the button to make the list come up or down from wherever it is.
“Maybe its broken ‘cause of confusion” whispered Nick
“Don’t say that it’s mean”
“At the Ministry the lifts there have buttons that are outward not in. And it can go anywhere in the building and some say that there’s a room there that isn’t even there. They call it the White Room,” said Hagrid
Suddenly there was a BIG boom and all the lights and power cut off.
(Chapter 3 won't be coming out for a long time so please be patient. I anticipate a month or 2 maybe by the end of December as a holiday treat. Chapter 3 will be very fun.)
